As for many other things, there is no right or wrong way to structure your page, but there are a few recommendations that make your page clearer and more complete. Here we have a few hints:
- Exploit all functionalities and features of the Blender Network: use the gallery to upload pictures, link a video, etc.
- Don't be shy in your description text: you could start talking about yourself, how you got in touch with Blender, what your current and past projects are, and what you hope to achieve
- Enrich your bio: use pictures or embed videos in your description and use the <h3> tag to title different paragraphs
- Request Developer and BFCT badges if you are entitled to